Book Review by Brenda S. Cox
“I have had ample time to consider the difference between my former, naïve ideas of love and happiness, and the more mature and accurate view of them I now possess. I find that my opinions are quite transformed. How differently I feel about everything now! – about what I want, about what will make me happy.”—Marianne Dashwood in the last chapter of Colonel Brandon in His Own Words
Colonel Brandon is a bit mysterious. He has a tragic past, which we only see in glimpses. Readers sometimes think he is too serious for Marianne, and we don’t see much of their courtship or love story. Movies add some of this in, but not enough, in my opinion.

So, I loved reading Colonel Brandon in His Own Words, by Shannon Winslow, which filled in the blanks and brought Brandon more to life for me. The story is consistent with Sense and Sensibility, but adds new insights to the novel.
Sometimes I hesitate to read a parallel Austen story, thinking I will already know everything in it since I know the novel so well. But this time each page brought something new. Even when familiar incidents were included, from Brandon’s perspective, I sometimes had to go back to S&S and check—was it really like that? And it was.
I asked the author to tell us more about why she wrote this book, and what she loved about writing it. Here’s what she shared with us:
Shannon Winslow’s Thoughts on Colonel Brandon in His Own Words
If you’re unfamiliar with my work, the first thing you should know is that I’m a little different – probably in a lot of ways, but I’m talking about my writing philosophy. It’s different from most other JAFF authors in at least two respects. Let me explain.
First, I love ALL of Jane Austen’s novels. Okay, maybe not equally. Like most people, Pride and Prejudice is my favorite, but they’re ALL worth reading. They’re ALL worthy of our attention. So, early on, I decided I wanted to write at least one novel related to each of Jane Austen’s six. And I’m almost there!
I have Pride and Prejudice covered (The Darcys of Pemberley, Return to Longbourn, The Ladies of Rosings Park, Miss Georgiana Darcy of Pemberley, Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words). I wrote The Persuasion of Miss Jane Austen (probably the book of which I’m proudest!) for her fans who wish she’d enjoyed the romance and happy ending she crafted for all her heroines. I count Leap of Hope as my Mansfield Park book (although there’s a lot of P&P in it too). And I have a campy sequel to Northanger Abbey: Murder at Northanger Abbey. Now with Colonel Brandon in His Own Words for Sense and Sensibility, I only have Emma left to go!
The second major difference between me and most other JAFF (Jane Austen Fan Fiction) authors is that I don’t write “variations” per se. I can’t swear that I never will, but so far the books I’ve written expand on (or supplement) Jane Austen’s stories; they don’t change them. So all my books agree with each other and with canon. It’s just the approach that works best for me. I guess I’m sappy enough to believe that there’s one “true story” for the characters I’ve come to know and love, and that’s the one Jane Austen wrote. Adding on (with sequels, minor character stories, etc.) simply allows us to spend more time in their delightful company.
In other words, filling in the blanks Jane Austen left behind is my bread and butter, and there are a LOT of intriguing blanks when it comes to Colonel Brandon. Sense and Sensibility follows Marianne’s and Elinor’s movements primarily, so they are well covered. But there’s quite a bit of time when the men (Edward and Colonel Brandon) are “off camera,” so to speak, creating interesting blanks in the record. Since I really enjoyed writing the first-person, hero’s point of view in my previous book (Fitzwilliam Darcy in His Own Words), I decided to do the same kind of thing for my S&S novel. But should I go with Edward or Colonel Brandon? Hmm.
No contest. In my opinion, Colonel Brandon is not only the more admirable character, he also has the more interesting backstory to work with. There’s so much we don’t know about him, though, and much of what we do happened long before the scope of the original novel. What were his family relationships like? And his sad history with Eliza, which scarred him for life? These things are briefly mentioned in Sense and Sensibility, but we don’t get any details. We don’t see and experience them for ourselves. What about his military years in India? That sounds like a research rabbit hole waiting to be explored. Lots of story potential!
I was also excited to flesh out Brandon’s romance with Marianne, huge portions of which are only hinted at by Jane Austen. She simply didn’t have the time and space to go into their 2-year courtship in any depth, but I did! I cover the day they met, their slow, gentle courtship, the proposal itself (with a very satisfying twist!), and then a brief glimpse into their married life. Everything is from Brandon’s point of view and in His Own Words.
It was such a joy to spend this past year with Colonel Brandon – quiet hero and consummate gentleman – poking around in his head, discovering more about the man, learning what he believes and how he thinks. I love and respect him all the more now! I hope you are a fan as well, or I trust you will be after reading his full story in Colonel Brandon in His Own Words.
More on the Book and the Author
Here’s the cover copy of the book:
Colonel Brandon is the consummate gentleman: honorable, kind almost to a fault, ever loyal and chivalrous. He’s also silent and grave, though. So, what events in his troubled past left him downcast, and how does he finally find the path to a brighter future? In Sense and Sensibility, Jane Austen gives us glimpses, but not the complete picture.
Now Colonel Brandon tells us his full story in His Own Words. He relates the truth about his early family life and his dear Eliza – his devotion to her and the devastating way she was lost to him forever. He shares with us a poignant tale from his military days in India – about a woman named Rashmi and how she likewise left a permanent mark on his soul. And of course Marianne. What did Brandon think and feel when he first saw her? How did his hopes for her subsequently rise, plummet, and then eventually climb upwards again. After Willoughby’s desertion, what finally caused Marianne to see Colonel Brandon in a different light?
This is not a variation but a supplement to the original story, chronicled in Brandon’s point of view. It’s a behind-the-scenes look at the things Jane Austen didn’t tell us about a true hero – the very best of men.
Shannon Winslow says an ordinary trip to Costco fifteen years ago changed her life when she picked up a copy of the ’95 miniseries of Pride and Prejudice. She’s been hopelessly hooked on all things Jane Austen ever since, her obsession ultimately inspiring her to write her own stories a la Austen. To date, she has authored eleven novels and a Jane Austen Devotional, with no end to her creative output in sight. Her two sons now grown, Shannon lives with her husband in the log home they built in the countryside south of Seattle, where she writes and paints in her studio facing Mr. Rainier. Visit her at her website and follow her on Facebook.
From Brenda again:
I highly recommend Colonel Brandon in His Own Words, especially to read in this year of focusing on Sense and Sensibility. I think it will add to your appreciation of S&S. I hope you will enjoy it as much as I did!
Brenda S. Cox writes on Faith, Science, Joy, and Jane Austen. Her book Fashionable Goodness: Christianity in Jane Austen’s England will be out this fall, Lord willing. If you’re interested in faith aspects of the book, see this review. And for Austen news, follow her on Facebook.
This sounds like a lovely book.
Colonel Brandon has always been one of my favorite characters.
denise
Dear Friends, Reading a few weeks ago about the new film version of Persuasion that has been released I wondered if your membership might be interested in a contention of mine regarding the original model of Kellynch, the home of Anne Elliot at the beginning of that wonderful book. I myself am a long term Austen enthusiast and I count Persuasion as one of my two joint favorites amongst her books (P&P inevitably being the other). I am also lucky enough to live in Honiton in England and am only about 15 miles from Lyme Regis where I frequently work. Indeed I often work within about 100 yards of the cob and have often enjoyed a stroll there at lunchtime. If one travels inland from Lyme due north for about 10 miles (significantly more by road) you come to a small town called Chard that claims to be the hometown of powered flight. From there it is about 6 and a half miles due East to Crewkern which I’m sure readers will remember was the place from whence one would order a carriage if you were living at Kellynch. About halfway between the two towns just to the south of the road in a very beautiful valley is a wonderful but slightly strange house and estate at a place called Cricket St. Thomas. You can look this up very easily on Google maps and there are many many photographs as it is now a Warner leisure Hotel. One can easily see that although it is not a very very large house it is none the less a place that any Baronet would be proud to call his home. I think it has quite a large amount of land with it and probably once owned many farms too. It is just into the southernmost part of the county of Somerset. This is the house that I suggest is the house Jane had in mind when she was writing Persuasion. I love to think of her sitting on the grass looking down at the lovely prospect of Cricket St Thomas house and wishing she and her own lost and charming Irishman could have lived in such a perfect spot. The reason that I believe this to have been her model for Kellynch is not simply that it is a nice idea. It also fits well with many of the things that Austen talks about in the book. Firstly that it was, at around the time the book is set, the home of a very well respected Admiral in the Royal Navy who was also famously Childless. It is also almost upon the line of the ancient Fosse way that would almost certainly have been the rout that anyone travelling down from Bath to Lyme Regis would have used at that time. Indeed the very point that you would leave the Fosse way and head toward the cost at Lyme was Cricket S.T. I am sure that with Austen’s interest in, and connections with, the Navy, when in the area she would certainly have made a point of going to at least see the house. She may have even stayed there if her brother was able to give some sort of introduction. The distances given as those to Lyme Regis and Bath from Kellynce of about 16 miles and within 50 miles also fit very accurately to the actual distances by road from those places. Although the distance to Chard is actually very slightly less, the main carriage road leading away from the house heads very definately in the Crewkern direction. I think Crewkern may have been a considerably larger town than Chard at that time before the railways. It was probably the town that Kellynch would have thought of as the place for any sort of commerce locally. It is some time since I did the research upon the Admiral in question and I fear I have forgotten his name but I do remember that he was one of two or even three brothers who were recruited into the navy from very humble origins and came to be very successful. I think their father was something like a carpenter. This of course also fits with Austen’s indication that the Navy was a vehicle for making good those of more modest backgrounds and Sir Walter’s irritation with that. I even believe that some aspects of Persuasion may be a kind attempt to flatter the man in question. If you folks are more interested in this subject I will endeavour to find out more about this man again. My oldest friend who I have know since boyhood is actually a very distant relative of this man and indeed Lord Nelson.
I have tried to interest Warner hotels in this possibility but rather to my surprise they did not even respond to my emails. However I hope you may be interested and please contact me if there is anything more I can tell you about the place, although I have to tell you that you are probably as able as I am at finding this since most of my research was simply on the internet. Please feel free to use any or all of my information or my email in any way you wish to.
Yours Sincerely Tom Hedger.
I think you have a point. Maybe, since this reputedly ghastly interpretation has hit the theaters, you should suggest the idea again.
Weren’t Cricket St Thomas exterior shots used as the manor house in the TV show To the Manor Born? The former house of Audrey Fforbes-Hamilton (Penelope Keith) and reluctantly sold to Mr De Vere?